I started out tonight by trying to work on my novella, but a combination of too much sugar and too little sleep have resulted in nothing but pages of incoherent rambling. So I thought I'd share a little anecdote instead.
Most people who know me know that I work in the clothing section of a large retail store. Tonight I was running around the footwear department, madly trying to tidy it up, and while I was working, my brain was thinking about my novella, and about where a major confrontation between the protagonist and the antagonist should take place. Half way through this train of thought, a customer ran up and hurriedly asked me a question before I had properly registered her presence. As a result, the conversation turned out as follows:
Customer: 'Scuse me, can you tell me where I can find the shoe polish?
Me: The Underworld?
Customer: ... What?
Me: *awkward, vacant pause* What? Oh. Um... Yeah, sorry, two aisles that way.
Luckily the customer had a sense of humour (after she got what she wanted, she came past again and said "Got my shoe polish, had to fight Hades for it though."), but it made me wonder if perhaps my preoccupation with Dark and Silent Waters had become a little unhealthy. Oh well... I'm sure it won't be the last time I make a fool of myself for the sake of my craft :D
Has anyone else out there had an experience where they had difficulty separating fiction from reality?
Sunday, November 14, 2010
Saturday, November 13, 2010
Hey, Doc, I Got A Bad Case Of Adjectivitis...
Just a quick post to share a blog post by Michael Pryor, author of (among other things) young adult fantasy series The Laws of Magic.
Writing Disease by Michael Pryor
To this list I would like to add Expositionitis: The tendency to dump dull/irrelevant information on the poor unsuspecting reader, resulting in hideous slabs of exposition lurking between otherwise reasonable paragraphs of prose.
I know that I have suffered from most of these on more than one occasion, and I'm sure most of my other fellow writers will empathise :) I think we need to get these recognised as official medical conditions. That way us writers can use them to take time off work/uni etc to work on our novels :D
Writing Disease by Michael Pryor
To this list I would like to add Expositionitis: The tendency to dump dull/irrelevant information on the poor unsuspecting reader, resulting in hideous slabs of exposition lurking between otherwise reasonable paragraphs of prose.
I know that I have suffered from most of these on more than one occasion, and I'm sure most of my other fellow writers will empathise :) I think we need to get these recognised as official medical conditions. That way us writers can use them to take time off work/uni etc to work on our novels :D
Saturday, November 6, 2010
Staring into Dark and Silent Waters...
I'm taking a short break from writing my novella (I just hit 6,000 words for NaNoWriMo :D), and I thought I'd post a link to the song that basically inspired the whole story:
Shallow Waters - Amberian Dawn
As I've mentioned (I think) in an earlier post, I was muddling away with my fantasy trilogy at the start of the year when I chanced upon this song on YouTube. In creative terms, listening to it was like being hit with a bomb. With the lyrics telling an engaging story and the music setting a dark and depressing mood, my brain filled with images and ideas the same way the Titanic filled with water after it crashed into that iceberg (although luckily my brain didn't sink into the Atlantic ocean, killing around 1,500 people). The world and characters came to life in my mind, growing and changing until it was like a movie playing in my head.
The song may not be to everyone's tastes, but I'm sure that those who have read bits of my novella so far will see how I made the connections (and yes, my novella's title was pilfered from the lyrics).
Out of curiosity, has anyone else ever had a moment where a song/TV show/whatever inspires them to write to the point where they can't step away from the keyboard?
Anyhoo, back to writing I go :)
Shallow Waters - Amberian Dawn
As I've mentioned (I think) in an earlier post, I was muddling away with my fantasy trilogy at the start of the year when I chanced upon this song on YouTube. In creative terms, listening to it was like being hit with a bomb. With the lyrics telling an engaging story and the music setting a dark and depressing mood, my brain filled with images and ideas the same way the Titanic filled with water after it crashed into that iceberg (although luckily my brain didn't sink into the Atlantic ocean, killing around 1,500 people). The world and characters came to life in my mind, growing and changing until it was like a movie playing in my head.
The song may not be to everyone's tastes, but I'm sure that those who have read bits of my novella so far will see how I made the connections (and yes, my novella's title was pilfered from the lyrics).
Out of curiosity, has anyone else ever had a moment where a song/TV show/whatever inspires them to write to the point where they can't step away from the keyboard?
Anyhoo, back to writing I go :)
Saturday, October 30, 2010
NaNoWriMo 2010
Well, November is almost upon us, and as most of my fellow writerly folk out there will know, that means it's... NaNoWriMo! (or National Novel Writing Month for those who aren't familiar with it). Basically, writers spend all of November writing a novel, with their ultimate goal being to hit 50,000 words. To find out more about it, click here.
I remember a few months ago, I posted a schedule of completion for my novella, Dark and Silent Waters. It was meticulously planned out and I was determined to stick to it... And naturally, study and illness and a plethora (I know that word is cliched but I still like saying it) of other Crap Events got in my way, so I ended up failing miserably. In fact I don't think I've even touched my novella since I posted the outline.
This will be my first year doing NaNoWriMo. Last year I didn't do it because I was too busy/lazy, but this year I've decided that it might just be the push I need to make some real progress on my novella. Generally I tend to focus too much on 'making something perfect' before moving on to the next bit, and I know that this slows me down. NaNoWriMo will give me an excuse to write absolute rubbish and not feel bad about it, as long as I can bring my manuscript closer to completion (and I can always edit the crappy bits later). I'm also hoping that competing/talking with other writers will give me even more motivation and inspiration to write.
I don't think I'll actually get to 50,000 words - as Dark and Silent Waters is a novella, I can't see it being much more than 40,000 words unless I pad it out with meaningless junk, which I don't want to do - but if I do get a completed draft of my manuscript, I will still consider myself a winner of NaNoWriMo (and I shall brag about it accordingly).
If anyone else is doing NaNoWriMo this year, feel free to add me as a buddy: RebeccaJFleming_DemonicDragon. We can nag/encourage each other on our respective paths to NaNoWriMo success :)
I remember a few months ago, I posted a schedule of completion for my novella, Dark and Silent Waters. It was meticulously planned out and I was determined to stick to it... And naturally, study and illness and a plethora (I know that word is cliched but I still like saying it) of other Crap Events got in my way, so I ended up failing miserably. In fact I don't think I've even touched my novella since I posted the outline.
This will be my first year doing NaNoWriMo. Last year I didn't do it because I was too busy/lazy, but this year I've decided that it might just be the push I need to make some real progress on my novella. Generally I tend to focus too much on 'making something perfect' before moving on to the next bit, and I know that this slows me down. NaNoWriMo will give me an excuse to write absolute rubbish and not feel bad about it, as long as I can bring my manuscript closer to completion (and I can always edit the crappy bits later). I'm also hoping that competing/talking with other writers will give me even more motivation and inspiration to write.
I don't think I'll actually get to 50,000 words - as Dark and Silent Waters is a novella, I can't see it being much more than 40,000 words unless I pad it out with meaningless junk, which I don't want to do - but if I do get a completed draft of my manuscript, I will still consider myself a winner of NaNoWriMo (and I shall brag about it accordingly).
If anyone else is doing NaNoWriMo this year, feel free to add me as a buddy: RebeccaJFleming_DemonicDragon. We can nag/encourage each other on our respective paths to NaNoWriMo success :)
Wednesday, September 1, 2010
Illustration: Yarraine from Exile
Going through my illustrations for things to put into my IT folio, I came across this; one of the first illustrations I did of Yarraine, the Dragon General, protagonist of my fantasy trilogy, Exile.
This illustration wasn't drawn specifically for my novel; in first year graphics, we had to create a character for a computer game, so I took my novel character and modified it slightly to fit with the game story I'd created (basically, Yarraine became the Dragon Empress instead of the Dragon General). At the time I was prepared to run with it as a suitable illustration for Yarraine as the General, but the more I thought about it, the more I realised her Empress costume I'd given her wasn't appropriate. The long, flowing dress and the mystical sceptre are all very showy and mysterious looking - which Yarraine is, in a way - but no one in their right mind is going to go into battle wearing that little number. And the pose doesn't really suit a powerful warrior-mage (though it does perfectly suit another main character from the trilogy, so I may reuse it when I draw the other character).
In the near future, I'm hoping to draw another version of Yarraine, this time wearing more battle-appropriate armour, and with a more commanding posture. And I'm also going to try to fix her hair (not 100% happy with how it turned out). I've improved my drawing skills since I drew this one, so hopefully my next effort will be cover-worthy hehe
This illustration wasn't drawn specifically for my novel; in first year graphics, we had to create a character for a computer game, so I took my novel character and modified it slightly to fit with the game story I'd created (basically, Yarraine became the Dragon Empress instead of the Dragon General). At the time I was prepared to run with it as a suitable illustration for Yarraine as the General, but the more I thought about it, the more I realised her Empress costume I'd given her wasn't appropriate. The long, flowing dress and the mystical sceptre are all very showy and mysterious looking - which Yarraine is, in a way - but no one in their right mind is going to go into battle wearing that little number. And the pose doesn't really suit a powerful warrior-mage (though it does perfectly suit another main character from the trilogy, so I may reuse it when I draw the other character).
In the near future, I'm hoping to draw another version of Yarraine, this time wearing more battle-appropriate armour, and with a more commanding posture. And I'm also going to try to fix her hair (not 100% happy with how it turned out). I've improved my drawing skills since I drew this one, so hopefully my next effort will be cover-worthy hehe
Tuesday, August 24, 2010
Narratives and Nocturnes
Earlier today, while working on my novella, I was flicking through my music collection, trying to decide what to listen to. I was getting more and more frustrated because I couldn't seem to find anything that would get the words flowing. And this made me wonder about some writerly advice I'd been given years ago. I can't remember who it was - I suspect it was one of my TAFE teachers from the Writing and Editing course, or perhaps another student - but whoever it was had said something along the lines of "Having any form of background noise while writing, whether it be television, music or life in general, distracts you from writing and has a negative impact on anything you do write."
To me, this is a bit like saying "Everyone must write with their left hand." or "Everyone should eat every meal with chopsticks." Something that helps one person might hinder another person. Likewise, if something is useful in one situation, that doesn't mean it will be suitable for other situations. I know some writers who able to write anywhere, whether they're in a busy cafe or on a crowded train. Others have to lock themselves in a cone of silence or they're unable to concentrate on anything.
And then there are some (like me) who need music to write.
Oddly enough, when I am writing non-fiction, such as articles or uni assignments, I prefer to work in silence. But when I'm writing fiction, I almost always have to have music. And the music has to create the same sort of atmosphere as the scene I'm trying to write.
When writing, I tend to listen to mostly gothic rock/symphonic metal bands, with a few exceptions. Mainly because I like the sound of it, but also because I feel that, in a way, it suits the genre I tend to write in (those of you who are familiar with my work will know that I write primarily dark fantasy). And quite often, when I'm stuck on a particular scene, listening to music can make the scene suddenly come to life in my mind, as if it's playing out before me as a movie. I actually have a set of songs for each 'type' of scene I write (anger/battle, sad/depressing or amusing etc).
I guess the notion of background music/noise as inpsiration or distraction can be applied to all creative endeavours, whether it be drawing, painting, sculpting and so on. Anyway, I thought I'd pose the question; what do all you other creative people out there do when you're trying to get those ideas flowing?
And, as an aside... Has anyone else ever been given really good - or really bad - advice on how they should work?
To me, this is a bit like saying "Everyone must write with their left hand." or "Everyone should eat every meal with chopsticks." Something that helps one person might hinder another person. Likewise, if something is useful in one situation, that doesn't mean it will be suitable for other situations. I know some writers who able to write anywhere, whether they're in a busy cafe or on a crowded train. Others have to lock themselves in a cone of silence or they're unable to concentrate on anything.
And then there are some (like me) who need music to write.
Oddly enough, when I am writing non-fiction, such as articles or uni assignments, I prefer to work in silence. But when I'm writing fiction, I almost always have to have music. And the music has to create the same sort of atmosphere as the scene I'm trying to write.
When writing, I tend to listen to mostly gothic rock/symphonic metal bands, with a few exceptions. Mainly because I like the sound of it, but also because I feel that, in a way, it suits the genre I tend to write in (those of you who are familiar with my work will know that I write primarily dark fantasy). And quite often, when I'm stuck on a particular scene, listening to music can make the scene suddenly come to life in my mind, as if it's playing out before me as a movie. I actually have a set of songs for each 'type' of scene I write (anger/battle, sad/depressing or amusing etc).
I guess the notion of background music/noise as inpsiration or distraction can be applied to all creative endeavours, whether it be drawing, painting, sculpting and so on. Anyway, I thought I'd pose the question; what do all you other creative people out there do when you're trying to get those ideas flowing?
And, as an aside... Has anyone else ever been given really good - or really bad - advice on how they should work?
Friday, July 16, 2010
Man's Best Friend... So Why Don't We Treat Him That Way?
Dogs. Anyone who has or has ever had one knows how much joy they can bring to the life of a person or family. Large dogs or small dogs, clever dogs or dopey dogs, they all bring a smile to your face when you get home from school or work and find them wagging their tail as they wait for you.
But the sad truth is, not all dogs end up in a suitable home.
Just under two months ago, the young couple in the middle unit next door bought a puppy. For the first week or so, it howled and whined constantly, starting as early as 6am and going until as late as 11pm, or in some cases until after midnight. Being a dog owner myself, I know that puppies do cry for company a lot until they adapt to their new home, so I thought it would stop after a few weeks. But it didn't.
Upon further observation, I noticed that the new puppy owners were going out at 7am, and not getting home until after 10pm pretty much every day. And then yesterday, having been woken once again by the dog's whining, I went out to look at the dog (part of filing a noisy animal complaint with a council requires you to verify that you saw the dog as well as heard it barking) through a hole in the fence. Now, keeping in mind that their backyard is about the size of a toilet, I assumed that I would see a Jack Russell or terrier or something similar. But no. It was a labrador.
How can anyone possibly think that having any dog - let alone something that will grow as big as a labrador - in a yard that small is a good idea? Dogs are naturally energetic creatures. They need exercise and space to run around. Sticking them in a yard the size of a car boot borders on animal cruelty (a far more serious and separate issue, which I don't intend to explore in this post). Box them into a yard like that and you might as well be keeping it in a cage.
Secondly, even if it does have a big yard to run around in, dogs are pack animals. They need social contact with other creatures, and that means they need to be with their human family. Not only because they get lonely, but also because they need to be mentally as well as physically engaged, by playing games with them, petting them, taking them for walks and so on. If they don't have this, they get bored, and as a result they will howl/bark constantly, dig holes and destroy anything they can get their teeth on. And then, when the owner decides they're not so cute anymore, the dog is either abandoned or dumped at an animal shelter, simply because their owner didn't bother to do any research on owning an animal before buying one.
I'm not saying that an owner should spend every waking moment with their dog - that would be ridiculous and impossible. But leaving a dog alone for pretty much the whole day every day is unacceptable. It is not fair on either the dog or on the neighbours who have to put up with it.
I think that one of the main causes of dogs ending up with unsuitable owners (apart from the sheer stupidity of some people) is that it is so easy to buy a dog. You can go into a shopping centre or down the main street of your town, walk into a pet shop and go home with a new puppy, no questions asked. My question is: Why?
Before buying a puppy, a prospective owner should be able to prove that they are capable of caring for an animal. They should have their home and property checked to make sure it is big enough. They should have their lifestyle examined to make sure they will be home enough to properly exercise, groom and accompany their pet. It should be difficult to buy a dog. That way, the only people who ended up with one would be people who were willing and able to look after it for the rest of its life, not just until it stops being small and cute and cuddly.
Edit: Upon recently seeing the dog again more clearly, I realised it was actually a staffordshire bull terrier. Not as big as a labrador, but still too big to live comfortably in a yard that small.
But the sad truth is, not all dogs end up in a suitable home.
Just under two months ago, the young couple in the middle unit next door bought a puppy. For the first week or so, it howled and whined constantly, starting as early as 6am and going until as late as 11pm, or in some cases until after midnight. Being a dog owner myself, I know that puppies do cry for company a lot until they adapt to their new home, so I thought it would stop after a few weeks. But it didn't.
Upon further observation, I noticed that the new puppy owners were going out at 7am, and not getting home until after 10pm pretty much every day. And then yesterday, having been woken once again by the dog's whining, I went out to look at the dog (part of filing a noisy animal complaint with a council requires you to verify that you saw the dog as well as heard it barking) through a hole in the fence. Now, keeping in mind that their backyard is about the size of a toilet, I assumed that I would see a Jack Russell or terrier or something similar. But no. It was a labrador.
How can anyone possibly think that having any dog - let alone something that will grow as big as a labrador - in a yard that small is a good idea? Dogs are naturally energetic creatures. They need exercise and space to run around. Sticking them in a yard the size of a car boot borders on animal cruelty (a far more serious and separate issue, which I don't intend to explore in this post). Box them into a yard like that and you might as well be keeping it in a cage.
Secondly, even if it does have a big yard to run around in, dogs are pack animals. They need social contact with other creatures, and that means they need to be with their human family. Not only because they get lonely, but also because they need to be mentally as well as physically engaged, by playing games with them, petting them, taking them for walks and so on. If they don't have this, they get bored, and as a result they will howl/bark constantly, dig holes and destroy anything they can get their teeth on. And then, when the owner decides they're not so cute anymore, the dog is either abandoned or dumped at an animal shelter, simply because their owner didn't bother to do any research on owning an animal before buying one.
I'm not saying that an owner should spend every waking moment with their dog - that would be ridiculous and impossible. But leaving a dog alone for pretty much the whole day every day is unacceptable. It is not fair on either the dog or on the neighbours who have to put up with it.
I think that one of the main causes of dogs ending up with unsuitable owners (apart from the sheer stupidity of some people) is that it is so easy to buy a dog. You can go into a shopping centre or down the main street of your town, walk into a pet shop and go home with a new puppy, no questions asked. My question is: Why?
Before buying a puppy, a prospective owner should be able to prove that they are capable of caring for an animal. They should have their home and property checked to make sure it is big enough. They should have their lifestyle examined to make sure they will be home enough to properly exercise, groom and accompany their pet. It should be difficult to buy a dog. That way, the only people who ended up with one would be people who were willing and able to look after it for the rest of its life, not just until it stops being small and cute and cuddly.
Edit: Upon recently seeing the dog again more clearly, I realised it was actually a staffordshire bull terrier. Not as big as a labrador, but still too big to live comfortably in a yard that small.
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